22B: Elevator Pitch No. 3
All three comments were nice and encouraging. They told me I showed great emotion on my second video compared to first and that the content was easy to follow and showed I was knowledgable about the subject. I think all the comments were encouraging and definitely were truthful. No one mentioned what I could work on so I tried making the same caliber of a pitch. People mentioned that they would at least look up the app because I caused an interesting product/service.
I keep everything the same because the feedback were all positive. However, I did try to work on the criticism given to me on the first pitch. The things I kept in mind were the distance of my camera (so you can see my hand gestures) and my enthusiasm. It was important me to keep up the simple but knowledgable delivery of the pitch so people will follow along all the way through the pitch and know exactly what the basics of the business are.
Thomas,
ReplyDeleteAs always, great job of explaining. The timing is good, the body language and gestures are spot on as well. Personally, I do not like the camera angle if I'm being honest. I prefer more of a level, front-facing shot but that may just be me.
Hey Thomas, as always I love commenting on your blogs because they are always super clean and easy to read, therefore easy to digest as well! I have to say I agree with Chris on the camera angle, it seems odd because if you were giving an elevator pitch I do not think I would be looking up as much as the camera suggests but also my camera angle is not great either so who knows. The main thing I really liked about this pitch is that even though you got all positive feedback you still made little adjustments to get even better. Some people stay complacent, but complacency is the enemy of greatness so I was happy to see this.
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