17A: Elevator pitch No. 2


I found out that the length was great in my pitch and also that I emphasized in depth knowledge about the subject. When reviewing my comments someone said I showed great emotion. When I reviewed the video myself I thought I didn't show enough emotion and it was something I needed to work on. I think the commenter was just being nice but I think that point wasn't accurate. I took inconsideration the distance of my camera so you could see my motions more precisely. 

I changed the position of the camera and tried to be more enthusiastic. I put the camera further back so you could see my hand motions better as mentioned in one of the comments. I tried being more enthusiastic because I think personally thats what I need to work on. 

Comments

  1. UnknownJuly 6, 2018 at 7:52 PM

    Hi Thomas...

    I think you did a good job showing emotion and expressing how things would work. You explained the different options within the app and how the pay scale works from a basic standpoint (which is all that's needed at this stage). Your explanation made sense to me and as a consumer, I would be likely to download the app or at the very least, pull it up in the app store and read more about it.

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  2. Karuna AssudaniJuly 8, 2018 at 1:11 PM

    Thomas, thank you for the video. It was clear that you put effort into this. You were enthusiastic about the product being sold in general, which is great! Most buyers look if you like the product or not and if it is useful to you. By showing that you are energetic, it shows that you care and like the product as well, making other want to buy it.

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  3. UnknownJuly 9, 2018 at 8:15 PM

    First, Thomas as always I love seeing how neat and organized your blogs are set up. Going more into the actual post here I really think you did an amazing job showing the passion and attitude that your voice has. You were able to simply talk through all of the options which I really appreciated. The actual presentation was simple and super easy to follow along with which I think is super important to an elevator pitch where you only get a short amount of time to show everything you have to offer.

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