10A: Elevator Pitch 1

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  1. Hi Thomas, I loved the pitch. I like how you show emotion when explaining the problem and your solution. I think that the length of the pitch was perfect and that your idea is very problematic. I also liked how you showed emotion but also remained professional throughout the pitch. It is important to find the right combination between the two and you did a great job.

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  2. Thomas, great job with the elevator pitch. It was clear that you had product knowledge and that you were confident with the background of the product you were talking about. Normally people will be more likely to purchase or at least look into what someone is saying based on how confident their speaking. The only thing I would switch is to have the camera further back so that I can see your hand gestures. That way when you move your hands, I can see what points you’re emphasizing.

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